Everyone knows that traffic accidents are a serious subject but don't tend to feel the same way about safe sex. I attempted to show that the impact of a crash is as severe as the impact of discovering and living with an STI.
I've mainly put the poster up to test the water as i'm not sure if i'm completely happy with it myself. Any feedback will be usefull. Thanks.
this poster is like a car crash... horrific
26th Nov 2007 4:35pm
this is awful
26th Nov 2007 4:47pm
constructive criticism. it needs to be cleaned up. maybe not have so much going on in the background. like the 'reflective' effect. just have it on a plain background. and also maybe not use illustrator, it may have more impact if they look like real cars.. also the text is really really bad. you have a great concept.. but you do need to work a lot more at it.
26th Nov 2007 4:59pm
thanks for giving me wot i asked for :) Its not a final or anywhere near. I just did a pic and chucked words on it. U've given me sum ideas though which is the reason behind me putting it on now. thanks again for actually giving me usefull feedback
26th Nov 2007 5:21pm
i can see your point. its just not put very well im sorry
26th Nov 2007 5:21pm
a good idea, but some sti's dont have any symptoms for years so it's a bit misleading.
27th Nov 2007 10:51am
can't really read the font, and ,maybe if you cut around the cars, and left the background blank
27th Nov 2007 9:09pm
I really like the idea of using a car crash to put the message across in an instant shocking way
30th Nov 2007 1:31pm
dolly
like the idea, but think it could have been pulled off alot better
26th Nov 2007 11:59am