'It'll never happen to me' - revised
I wanted to keep the poster minimal and simple.
I wanted to express the thoughts of someone who might have an STI who slept around without using a condom and i achieved this by using each line ' It'll never happen to me' representing a new sexual partner and the final being the 10th who he catches the STI off of. Then underneath is a simple fact about STI's.
Although my poster hasnt much of a design elemt to it i still think it gets a meaning across without any jokes or in depth thought into the poster.
LETS FACE IT A PASSER-BY WILL TAKE ONE LOOK AT A POSTER IT NEEDS TO GET TO THE POINT QUICKLY!
Comments:
poopoohead
you say you wanted to keep it simple but its too much.same sentece over and over . not catchy enough
22nd Nov 2007 11:49am
georgejosephharvey
"LETS FACE IT A PASSER-BY WILL TAKE ONE LOOK AT A POSTER IT NEEDS TO GET TO THE POINT QUICKLY!"- no... this is not getting to the point quickly. there is too much repetition..and nothing interesting about the poster to make anyone look in the first place. By just saying "it Happened" doesn't mean its to the point. You need to definately rethink the visuals and concept completely in my opinion.
22nd Nov 2007 6:35pm
» crackpot07 responded:
lets face it YOU think everything is rubbish, there is no satisfying you.
22nd Nov 2007 7:46pm
Joeglos
i agree with georgejosephharvey! you might as well have written "1 in 10 people have an sti" the repetitiveness plays no role in the poster, it bores the viewer, the logo is too big, there is no idea here! the 1 in 10 angle definately has scope but you clearly need to spend longer thinking of a solution.
23rd Nov 2007 1:48am
ChaterMade
i dont think you've edited it much
22nd Nov 2007 10:02am