Mistakes you can't erase
With this poster I wanted the tagline to be the main aspect of promoting Durex, so I didn't want to over complicate the image. I decided to add an Ipod and car keys to give it a more student feel, and to appeal more to the target audience.
Comments:
chatera
this is cool. a different approach.
21st Nov 2007 4:53pm
harriann (Angharad Loveday)
It's trendy, people will probably look at the mp3 player first mind, but then you have to think. It works, well done!!!
21st Nov 2007 7:38pm
Jojo
it works well
21st Nov 2007 9:44pm
glen
good idea! mayb the design could be enhanced bu the mistakes bit is really good.
22nd Nov 2007 5:26pm
bgreese (Barry Greese)
it doesnt compete with the design skills of other posters but it is an excellent idea. shame about the overall idea.. it kiinda looks messy.. a bit more time on this and it could be a competer..
22nd Nov 2007 6:18pm
rywel
might work if the design was better..get rid of the mp3 maybe? maybe just have a plain pencil and pad, with the rubber. without the mp3 player..?
22nd Nov 2007 7:06pm
» Dreamcatcher366 responded:
Thank you for your comments, i did originally do it without the keys and ipod, but it looked really young, and it could of given off the idea of underage sex, because it did look really childish. Which is why i feel i had to include them both, to make it seem older.
22nd Nov 2007 7:30pm
ajbarnsley
good idea but not executed very well. probably wouldnt make me think bowt using a condom
23rd Nov 2007 9:26am
the_boss
too messy lookin sorry
23rd Nov 2007 2:28pm
Posterman
i honestly dont like it. Sorry but i dont. Too much going on and it isnt very clear.
23rd Nov 2007 9:34pm
bubaganoush
just doesnt work
25th Nov 2007 7:40pm
Joeglos
weak idea, unprofessional design, awful type, this doesn't work on any level.
25th Nov 2007 7:52pm
ChaterMade
superb premise, expertly executed . well done.
21st Nov 2007 11:17am