No Excuses
Well i decided to put across a powerful statement and promote an actual Durex product at the same time. I mainly used colors to grab peoples attention. But the message is clear. Many teenagers have come to a conclusion that unprotected sex feels so much better than protective sex. Well now with Fetherlite they don't have an excuse. This should hopefully encourage younger groups to think twice about it and actually go out an buy some. Because the risk just isn't worth it. Although many girls use the pill contraceptive method, it still doesn't protect from spreading STD's. This is what i want to put across, and in many future posters to come.
Thank you for your time, and i shall be uploading more in the future.
Comments:
ChaterMade
It looks very dis-organised, and I cant tell what is going on. Also the grey 'bubble' doesnt represent anything.. Also the 'No' is put over the box of condoms and is hard to recognise with a durex logo in the background. Apart from that WELL DONE!
16th Oct 2007 11:35am
jessica
to me this poster looks all over the place, should have picked one thing and stuck with it, not tryed 10 different ideas in one poster.
18th Oct 2007 11:22am
AlisonWhite (Alison White)
great idea, only thing is you can't read the 'no excuses' to clearly and thats areally good message. if it stood out more it would be really good.
19th Oct 2007 12:55pm
Holgater
I could only see the excuses upon first look along with too many different colours. why is there a grey blob there?
19th Oct 2007 6:54pm
how_creative
I feel like it's a bit to manic. If this were on a billboard and people were driving by in their car it would be extremely hard to take it in. I think your ideas are really good, especially because a lot of teenagers wont use condoms because they think it feels different so i think your idea is spot on!
21st Oct 2007 9:20am
nico
too crowded in my opinion, you struggle to see the point of the advert! very creative layout but no point being creative when the message is hidden!
21st Oct 2007 4:24pm
sjc89 (Sarah Harman)
I can see where your coming from. but you have too many layers on top of each other, its a bit complex, if you defined cetain aspects, and made parts less transparent to hide others parts; this would draw the eye to certain places, so it could flow alot better and make your message clearer.
23rd Oct 2007 3:38pm
fluffy
what the hell is going on who's that kid why has he got a condom packet for a face what the fuzzy bit about a first I thought it was a condom on top of a dick then on closer inspection I found it was the kid's face so what dose that leave me think is it sperm? We can't set our eye on the Tex giving us no clues on what's going onwe can't set our eye on the tex giving us no clues on what's going on
26th Oct 2007 1:02am
IJ3749
too much stuff
30th Oct 2007 7:04pm
Bob
This is just a mess.
31st Oct 2007 3:27pm
liv_vibert
photoshop epilepsy
31st Oct 2007 3:30pm
irisbee
random blobs of grey... am i being stupid and do they mean something? along with the quite basic positions of the text this doesnt do it for me
2nd Nov 2007 5:56pm
cliffybiro
what is going on here? it is just a mess! why would you use so many filters on it? keep in mind the phrase "less is more"
6th Nov 2007 12:22pm
april
i agree. This poster is way to messy. At first glance people wont understand it......
6th Nov 2007 2:11pm
Dreamcatcher366
i like how the colours on the left hand side are eye catching, although when you look across the page its just a bunch of images that have been layered on top of each other
12th Nov 2007 3:41pm
Nic255
Colourful but very confusing :/
16th Nov 2007 10:34am
wiggyreed
the poster is too busy, complicated and not set out well. the no over durex is a very bad mistake, you can hardly read them.
21st Nov 2007 4:12pm
georgejosephharvey
have you just discovered photoshop?
21st Nov 2007 5:09pm
Jojo
is a bit disorganised but if it was altered slightly then it would be quite good!
21st Nov 2007 9:33pm
karen89
tooooo much. there's too much happening. too much text, too much colour too much everything. tone it down and we could have a winner but for now tis a bit....mind boggling.
22nd Nov 2007 8:41pm
dizzynub
urm?
23rd Nov 2007 9:34am
willy
your stating that your using a powerfull message. I dont see it, its lost in the confusion of all the stuff and colour going on. And then you have the logo two times in the poster, on of them completely bend out of shape. And theres no colour match to the Durex. Theres no way people would relate to this poster, andbe targeted either. This poster wouldnt even make yourself stop and think.
27th Nov 2007 5:57pm
greene (Emma Green)
Its a very good idea. I like it alot. However, its hard to read the text. From a first glance it looks like a mess, its only when you take the time to read it that the message is clear. Therefore i dont think it would be good, because an advert has to catch your attention.
15th Oct 2007 12:13pm